Hamlet Act II Response
As you finish Act II of the play, you are to write a Think Piece that identifies the most significant element and how that element works to convey a tone or theme or develop a character.
Reflection
After revising this essay, i would change a few things if i were to rewrite it. First I would fix my grammatical errors including mostly apostrophes when Hamlet is possessing particular character traits or items. I would do this because these are careless errors that need to be addressed. I would also like to add more analysis when talking about Hamlet's madness because I think that i summarized too much and it would add more intellect to my essay and provide more depth for the reader. The last thing that i would change if i were to rewrite this essay would be to reverse my first two sentences in the last paragraph. I should not have started it with a quote, instead i should have created a topic sentence to begin the paragraph and then insert the quote after. This would produce a better rhythm for the reader and allow them to quickly understand what the paragraph is going to contain after the first sentence.